Sunday, November 25, 2007

alien

if i could invent and alien its name would be cedric because thats a name that isnt used that much. Cedric is 8 feet tall and weighs about 154 lbs. His skin is able to turn whatever color he wants it too. He has the same facial features as humans only he has 3 eyes instead of 2. Cedric is very funny and outgoing and loves music. From were he is from they have no feeling of anger therefore cedric always is in a positive state of mind. As i woke up yesterday i heard a ring at the door. I had no idea who it was and when i opened the door i was shocked to see an 8 foot alien waiting at my doorstep. He very kindly introduced himself and told me why he was here. He has an ability to time travel to any point in time whether its to the future or back. He asked what and were i would like to go today. i told him i would love to see john bonahm perform a drum solo and maybe even get on stage with him. In seconds i was back in time watching my hero do what he does best. i couldnt beleive this was actually happening. Cedric only is allowed three travels per day so i had to choose wisely. the next place i wanted to go was back in time with the eygptians and i was amazed. Ive always thought the eygptians were very smart with the ways they built the pyramids. i only got to stay for a while and suddenly we traveled out of time and were millions of years into the future, thats what we thought. we were both speechless at the sight, there was no one to be found not even a single plant and all i could think about was how am i going to get back. we took our time exploring the world we didnt know. suddenly the earth shook and the ground we were just standing on seperated and floated away further into space. Cedric finally got his powers to work again but could not find the location of were we where. then as i looked in the distance i saw a round blue ball and knew i was not on planet earth anymore. Cedric and i were on a meteor headed straight to our planet. we could see the second half of the rock moving away from earth and into the depths of space. i told cedric were going to need to think fast because if we dont make it back onto the planet we will be the ones floating away. Then as i heard a loud noise i saw the biggest,craziest looking ship ive ever seen. Cedric grabbed me and gave me his time watch and left me as he boarded his ship. i stood alone on the cold peice of rock as it approached earth. As i thought hard of were i wanted to be the most i could only come up with one answer. Home.

1 comment:

hogan said...

There's a lot of potential here, Kevin. SHOW in your writing. Rather than using adjectives to push your descriptions, show the events and incidents to show the details